Thursday, April 20, 2017

On Word Counts

Yesterday, I finished the day's work on the latest first draft, coming to a stopping point at exactly 32,000 words. Knowing what's left of the story to tell, and accounting for the unforeseen, yet natural, bursts of inspiration that take the story in different directions before returning to the mainline, I estimate the first draft of Mystery Garden will end somewhere between 58,000 and 62,000 words.

For me, that's about right.

Of course, my first drafts are all about laying the groundwork; my first drafts are barebones. The subsequent drafts are when I focus on building the world around the frame I've constructed, honing the balance between what's necessary for you to know, and what gets the point across. My goal, by the time I finish my fourth draft, is to give you, dear reader, a seamless film in your head to imagine while you're reading that moves along at a steady pace, paints a beautiful picture that's framed with precise composition, and, equally as important, doesn't overwhelm you in minutiae. If I dedicate more than ten words about a rocking chair then that chair is significant (or just a red herring), otherwise I won't bother. A reader doesn't need to know, or be told, everything.

And yet, for those who have never looked into the word count of their favorite books, 62,000 words is relatively short for a novel. Novels are defined (and this is depending on where you look; I'm gathering from a few general sources here) as being, typically, between 40,000 and 120,000 words. But there's a lot of wiggle room, especially toward the far side of that spectrum. There are also a lot of factors that are included in those longer word counts, like genre, subplots, the inclusion of side characters, or shifting POV to other main characters, etc. It depends a lot on the author and their style. My favorite author is Stephen King, and maybe only one or two of his books are anywhere near that 40,000 word count bookend (Carrie, one of his shortest novels, is somewhere around 63k); many of his works reside in the 200,000 range (like Bag of Bones). His novel, The Girl Who Loved Tom Gordon, one of my favorites, is shorter than his typical fare (around 60k), but also focuses primarily with a single character, whereas Mr. Mercedes (around 130k) alternates between telling the story from the view of the protagonist, Bill Hodges, and antagonist, Brady Hartsfield.

What does the amount of words in a story mean in the grand scheme of things? Not a whole lot, really. I admit, I'm one of those writers who's obsessed with word count. It bothers me though. I hate that it creeps into my mind when I'm telling a story, because the amount of words I use is the last thing that should concern me, rather than how I'm using the words I'm using, and why. But it does. I suppose it's because I want to give the reader as much as I can, and not have them feel slighted - give them their money's worth. Give them a place they can lose themselves for a while and concern them with a fictional character's plight rather than anything going on in their own lives. And I know that's easier with a denser book.

As it is, I know my pacing, my style, and I know my inclination (and comfort) to focus my stories from the point of view of a single protagonist and put them through the ringer with a sprinkling of side characters who join the fray. My stories are smaller, intimate, closed off. I also know a longer book doesn't necessarily make a better one. Ray Bradbury's Fahrenheit 451 is considered one of the best novels ever written and it's only about 45k words. My own personal favorite book, A Monster Calls (by Patrick Ness) is only 35k long.

Perhaps someday I'll write that sprawling novel that shifts points of view, balancing numerous main characters and subplots. I know I want to. I have the ideas for it.

As an interesting comparison in closing (and because I thought it made a cool visual), below are two pictures of completed manuscripts. The first is the tree that was destroyed in stacking up Stephen King and Owen King's upcoming collaboration, Sleeping Beauties, and the second is a third draft manuscript to my second novel, The Painted Lady (which, at third draft, was around 71,000 words).

Stephen and Owen King's Sleeping Beauties (2017)

My very own The Painted Lady (2015)

Saturday, April 1, 2017

Before Being Published and After


My writing life (dare I call it a career?) is divided into two parts: Before being published, and After.

The time Before spanned a great deal of years, from around age 10 through my teens when I was writing stories strictly for fun, and then from my mid-twenties to age 31 when I decided to really hunker down and focus on the craft, which involved the output of dozens of short stories, a bunch of flash fiction, a few novellas, and four (trunk) novels. I was 27 when I met the girl who became my wife, who also took on the mantle of my muse and inspired me to finally chase down the dream of publication with the utmost seriousness and putting forth my best effort.

Perhaps needless to say, I did it. Besides a few small tales and non-fiction pieces published on the Net, two of my short stories were chosen for issues of RiverLit magazine in early and late 2014. Seeingmy first novel (a coming of age story), was published June 27, 2014. The Painted Ladymy second novel (a paranormal thriller/romance), came out August 5, 2015. And my novella An Unexpected Visit dropped recently on November 16, 2016.

And so, from age 31 on, I've been living in the After.

And, to be honest to those still seeking their first book contract, there is no Happily Ever After when you sign your name the first time. I'm not trying to dissuade anyone from seeking a publisher and, instead, going it alone, but rather commenting on a reality. I'm not set for life. I'm not making enough to do a multi-state bookstore tour. I'm still working a day job. I've also discovered what once was a singular goal to just be published has exploded into many more objectives in the literary world I want to achieve.

A few weeks ago I put the finishing touches on a novella I absolutely love called Something Above the Stars that I've sent out to numerous publishers who focus on novella-length works. One of my newer goals is to branch out and work with different publishers, different editors, to learn more about the industry via how others do the work from handling the manuscript to putting out the finished book. I want to get more experience, more comfortable with promotion, and I want to feel I've earned it again. I also have a deep admiration for the novella, so another of my new goals is to get my work in the hands of a publisher who specializes in that particular form. If Stars isn't destined for acceptance, waiting in the wings I have six other novellas in different draft stages ready to continue working on once I finish with my most recent undertaking.

I'm currently in the first quarter of the first draft of a new novel called Mystery Garden. I don't want to put out a lot about this project right now because it is so new, but if you follow my Twitter for the month of April, you'll get bits and pieces by way of the hashtag #WIPjoy (WIPjoy is a wonderful event held every few months that encourages writers who are at work to share about their projects and to support others).

When Mystery Garden is done... I'm not exactly sure what I'm going to do with it. One of my larger goals has always been to get in with one of the top tier publishers. To do that, I unquestionably have to get an agent, which isn't just difficult and stressful, but very time consuming, and requires me to raise my game. With time never standing still, and never a guarantee, the question I ask myself all the time is when am I finally going to pull the trigger and go all in on the agent search, especially considering it takes me about a year to do my four drafts of a novel (and that's with no side projects). Saying I could begin the search with the novel following Garden means I wouldn't even begin putting out queries for another two years.

Right now, that feels like too much time.

I know it may be hard for my readers to accept that they may not see another publication from me anytime soon. Yes, I always have Winter Goose as a home for my work, but I never want to use them as a back-up. They were my first publisher - my first YES! - and if I do publish work through them, it'll be work I intended to give them.

So, this is where I'm at. Both exciting and uncertain times, for sure.

Stay tuned.